Readers Comments
landon wilbur wrote: This short story was very nice!
I love how such a small thing like a bouncy ball can change someone's life (:
I love how such a small thing like a bouncy ball can change someone's life (:
linklink88 wrote: Thats very nice.
ngoanas wrote: Thanks for the strenghthening story. This should motivate you for you motivated me to stand the ground when is time to. Let god bless you through all your perforrmance so hit the number one sport with a 0. 5point differance.
pjacob wrote: Really fascinating. Your words "no words passed between us. It was a silent understanding. Words would ruin the moment. " shows that you are not only a poet but a writer. Your future would make many happy. A parting word. The best attitude is gratitude.
john wrote: really a wonderful story in suspense
im @ your house! wrote: i like this story alot
i just never knew that so many people carried smile cards
:)
i just never knew that so many people carried smile cards
:)
peepers wrote: I wish I had your courage at your age. Good job. I am finally getting my voice and I'm twice your age. :)
freeHUGSrock wrote: I put up the poem here is anyone is wanting to read it. You can find it at this url: http://www.helpothers.org/my/story.php?op=view&sid=4339
It is called The Tribute Poem
It is called The Tribute Poem
elizaliza wrote: It is nice to always do something that makes every moment worth remembering. I wish you geater success in all ur future endeavours.
Heart wrote: That's amazing you must be a great poet
Keep trying to be the best
Keep trying to be the best